what up my main man Josh; lookin good here. I would venture to say that Adream would call your work masculine, especially the first composition with all the browns and strong geometric forms. I like the colors you chose a lot; it seems like a color-scheme that not many people have been using. To me, this composition balances right on the line between being clear/direct and being too busy...but I think it's working. I think, since your nonobjective elements keep their hands to themselves, they enhance the flow of the text rather than impede on it.
I really like the fourth one down, the diagonal composition with the green headers that fling off to the side. It's a dynamic composition and there's really no question about where I'm supposed to start reading and what order top go in. I guess if I had one suggestion to spice it up a little, it would be to slightly tilt the plane in the upper right so that the "body-shape" isn't a perfectly parallel shape but more pinched at one end.
Other than that I think you've got the right idea with this stuff. Your use of nonobjective elements is substantial but not overwhelming and the way you have divided the text is nice an logical.
what up my main man Josh; lookin good here. I would venture to say that Adream would call your work masculine, especially the first composition with all the browns and strong geometric forms. I like the colors you chose a lot; it seems like a color-scheme that not many people have been using. To me, this composition balances right on the line between being clear/direct and being too busy...but I think it's working. I think, since your nonobjective elements keep their hands to themselves, they enhance the flow of the text rather than impede on it.
ReplyDeleteI really like the fourth one down, the diagonal composition with the green headers that fling off to the side. It's a dynamic composition and there's really no question about where I'm supposed to start reading and what order top go in. I guess if I had one suggestion to spice it up a little, it would be to slightly tilt the plane in the upper right so that the "body-shape" isn't a perfectly parallel shape but more pinched at one end.
Other than that I think you've got the right idea with this stuff. Your use of nonobjective elements is substantial but not overwhelming and the way you have divided the text is nice an logical.
Good work!