Hi Goran, I really like your use of line in the second one with the reflected shape of the grid in the top right. That is a great extra touch that is suggestive and not too overpowering. Good Job!
The control that you have established over all three of these layouts is great for the viewer. I know exactly where to look and I understand the information clearly. I also enjoy the unique way you used the logo in the third one, engaging the square form with the background and successfully tying in in with the rest of the layout. Experiment more with interline spacing and kearning. The type is all very stable and uniform. Although you have very visually interesting compositions, variations within the type itself could add something as well.
Hi Goran, I really like your use of line in the second one with the reflected shape of the grid in the top right. That is a great extra touch that is suggestive and not too overpowering. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteThe control that you have established over all three of these layouts is great for the viewer. I know exactly where to look and I understand the information clearly. I also enjoy the unique way you used the logo in the third one, engaging the square form with the background and successfully tying in in with the rest of the layout. Experiment more with interline spacing and kearning. The type is all very stable and uniform. Although you have very visually interesting compositions, variations within the type itself could add something as well.
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