I like the way you positioned the type in the very top one. Everything is easy to read in the way it's laid out, and I can see a hierarchy with more important information or headers bolded. The logo still sits kind of heavy at the bottom, but it helps that it is reversed out in white.
The second grid layout is also interesting. I like the repetition of the circle, it helps to balance out the page.
For the fourth down, I like what's starting to happen with the shapes you used. Overall, it looks like too much of a sun to me, but I like how text is enclosed at the bottom (the date & time). This could be really interesting to direct attention toward different areas of text.
I notice that a lot of yours have text spread out pretty evenly in a left and right column. This is different than the one column of text, maybe try shifting things around more. Playing with added elements and shapes may help make things more symmetrical if you still want to maintain that balance.
Good job on making them all legible and easy to follow.
I like the way you positioned the type in the very top one. Everything is easy to read in the way it's laid out, and I can see a hierarchy with more important information or headers bolded. The logo still sits kind of heavy at the bottom, but it helps that it is reversed out in white.
ReplyDeleteThe second grid layout is also interesting. I like the repetition of the circle, it helps to balance out the page.
For the fourth down, I like what's starting to happen with the shapes you used. Overall, it looks like too much of a sun to me, but I like how text is enclosed at the bottom (the date & time). This could be really interesting to direct attention toward different areas of text.
I notice that a lot of yours have text spread out pretty evenly in a left and right column. This is different than the one column of text, maybe try shifting things around more. Playing with added elements and shapes may help make things more symmetrical if you still want to maintain that balance.
Good job on making them all legible and easy to follow.