down the line.. 1. I like the nonobjective elements... BUT I'd like to see more interaction between the type and those elements. I feel like there's a lot of white space to the left which can be activated by playing around with the type. Right now everything is symmetrical and lined well, but I feel like playing around with the type on both sides of the grid would be good. I'd like to see the text less condensed, spreading across the page (rather than the right side). 2. I like that you've drawn the color of the nonobjective elements into the type. Similar with the first design, I feel that there could be more interaction between the nonobjective elements and the type. Also, it seems odd that 'AIGA-UWM presents' is placed vertically and no other text is. 3. Again, I'd like to see the nonobjective elements interact and play off of the text.
down the line..
ReplyDelete1. I like the nonobjective elements... BUT I'd like to see more interaction between the type and those elements. I feel like there's a lot of white space to the left which can be activated by playing around with the type. Right now everything is symmetrical and lined well, but I feel like playing around with the type on both sides of the grid would be good. I'd like to see the text less condensed, spreading across the page (rather than the right side).
2. I like that you've drawn the color of the nonobjective elements into the type. Similar with the first design, I feel that there could be more interaction between the nonobjective elements and the type. Also, it seems odd that 'AIGA-UWM presents' is placed vertically and no other text is.
3. Again, I'd like to see the nonobjective elements interact and play off of the text.